- Created By twilight tiger
Yesterday...
Part 2:Re-living the Past
Yesterday, I fell...
into your trap,
forever.
Yesterday, you said...
I love you now;
whatever.
Yesterday, I said...
I love you too;
now, never.
***
Yesterday, She told me...
Why do you play,
into his game?
Yesterday, I told her...
I don't know why;
it causes me pain.
***
Before, I was blind.
Now, I am not.
Now, I can fight,
And see what I've sought.
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This poem was trying to get the basics of what happened down in rhyming form, along with my thoughts on the matters. When he told me he loved me, I think back and say to myself, "whatever". I told him I loved him, now I think, not now, not ever. My friend asked me ( irritated ), why do you play into his games? Why do you fall into his traps? and the only answer I had for her was...I don't know >.< We both agreed it caused me pain. I was blind before, not seeing what he was doing, or what he's done. but now, i can fight back. see my goal again (to forget and move on)
Please let me know if these stink. This one, I'm not so sure of it's quality. I would appreciate it if you let me know what you think, and what you think could have been better. Thank you
number 2 poem -_-
VAMPIRE She wakes up in room, unaware, of what awaits her, it's a scare, On her elbows, she arises, While dilating- her iris...End
